Word of the day: Audacity
n., pl., -ties.

1. Fearless daring; intrepidity.
2. Bold or insolent heedlessness of restraints, as of those imposed by prudence, propriety, or convention.

Just a bit of inspiration for ya. ^-^ I had actually used it for a BTtS future (near-future actually) chapter and really liked it (the word). =D
Speaking of said chapter, I have a few snippets of dialogue/thought/etc. used. I'll put them below, but I won't put names on them. XD I've blurted out the majority of names and pronouns to confuse people until it's put up.

"You love her, don't you?" he taunted.

"You're damn right I do," ____ snarled.

"Please don't do this to me, Sayuri."

_____ knelt down next to _____'s lifeless body and gently scooped [her/him] up in [her/his] arms and checked to see if [he/she] was breathing.

That's all for now... I might put a little more up later, but I really don't have much written of it. Admittedly there is HitsuxSayu-ness in this particular piece, but when I got bored of writing all the action, I skipped to Aizen's defeat and the fluff/ending parts.
Now, for the other fail ending chapter (I wrote this before I was completely decided on Aizen's death. It won't be used in the story):

    Toshiro woke up and rubbed his eyes. He looked at his surroundings. He was in the fourth division, his torso dressed in bandages. He shifted a little and noticed something weighing down the bed sheets. There Sayuri lie with her head on the cot.
    "Poor thing. It's about time she got some sleep," Unohana said from the door. "This must be the first time she's slept since we brought you in here." Toshiro brushed some hair out of her  face and rested his hand on her cheek.
    "How long have I been out?" he said.
    "Three days."
    Sayuri heard the two talking and started to wake up. She blinked a couple times and looked at him still half asleep. Toshiro smiled softly at the groggy girl. He tried to sit up, but a sharp pain in his chest stopped him from doing so. Sayuri quickly grabbed a few pillows and propped him up to set them behind him. Unohana quietly slipped out the door to give the two some space.
    "You'll hurt yourself again if you move too much," she said.
    "I'm fine," he assured her. "Just stay here for awhile."
    Toshiro pulled her closer, and she wrapped her arms around him. He took in the smell of her hair. It was sweet like a lily. "I'm not going anywhere," she said.